Analysis of TIME AND SPACE IN THE CROSSHAIRS



In the crosshairs of time and space, no one has the right to compare me to anyone.

Otherwise, I rarely care anymore, because they all acted foolishly

they thought they knew me like the judgmental clueless, who

I have been honest enough

from the pious shackles of friendship because it has become more important to them

foolable, deceitful blindness, like unconditional trust

or commended sympathy.

My imperfection, if ever, was

he could be faithful and loyal

human associations that are somewhat equal

we could be partners. To see, many will feel,

that this unworthy generation will return

the holy moments of peace,

when empathy-tolerance is given

he carried a wise admonition,

and the many unworthy, false Janus

rather, he was hanged or just deliberately

Man can be destroyed just as

the Wagner twilight of the colonies and empires -

you can be creative when you are creative

his mind is rioting in the struggle for the power of possession.

If you are pathetic, dissolute behind the Will you have been getting

more often the fikracky instinct of life is shaken

the best experience is just falling

it remains at last.

And never to be given away

you should stand there proudly, with your head raised

or paroled, as if it were a right and a privilege

that it is possible to march with impunity. Because

now all have become suspicious who are naive and deceitful

gullible. He's too confident in his worldly affairs.

He has-had-become a toy for small-time, usurping toys.

The slug-slip of words is an unworthy mode, if it is certain

it threatens to brainwash - there should be no point in participating. - Forbidden-lost

train will slow down and click with the noise of wheels splintered

Hamlet-due to skulls…


Scheme A B X X X X B C D D X X X A A X B X X X A E A E F X X X C D X X A F X X
Poetic Form
Metre 0011101111011011110 10110101011110100 1111110010101 1111001 101010110011101101011 101010101001 1010100 10101101 11110010 100010111110 11110111011 11010010101 0101011 1100100110 11001010 0010010110 101111101000 1110111 0101101000100 111010111010 111100001010101010 1110101010111110 110011011110 0101001110 10111 010111001 1111101111 1011110010010 111100111010001 111010101110010 10011100011001 1110101111101 0111111010111110 1101111111001001001 1111011011110 10111
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,802
Words 350
Sentences 12
Stanzas 36
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 38
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Written on February 01, 2024

Submitted by oasev on January 31, 2024

1:45 min read
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Norbert Tasev

 · Budapest

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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