Analysis of If i could.

Kavi 2004 (Rajasthan)



If I could change the past I would change you into someone who is still with me,

If I could rewrite this story I would write us as the main characters,

If I could be a lost butterfly, I would wander through a garden full of you,

If my soul could escape this body it'd enter hers ,when she's with you,

If I could be the sand of the desert, I would choose only your feet to go deep within me

If I could lose myself in anything, I would lose myself in the star you stare at every night,

Only if I could be destiny I would design us together forever.


Scheme A X B B A X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111101111111 111011101111101100 1111011011101010111 111101110101001111 11110110101111011111011 1111101011110011111001 10111110011011010010
Characters 552
Words 123
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 60
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 60
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

In this poem the poet is trying to describe how she would be ready to become anything for that one person if she is ever given a chance or she was the writer of her destiny.

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Written on March 01, 2024

Submitted by jatkavi267 on January 10, 2024

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