Analysis of White Fire

Jacob Ray 1988 (Stuttgart)



Earth's vast bed, filled with bones and sins,
Swollen memories forever fade.
Books holding valued citizens,
A predetermined hall of fame.

I saw a white fire blaze
Across the night sky,
One for the good side?
Are there devils in the stars,
Are the angels winning?
Who sits on Moon's Throne?
Father, I know you're in Heaven,
Perhaps it's your Spirit?

Suddenly, all is quiet under open space,
Swirling breath pushed in place.
Pressure released without a trace,
Renowned for glory, written on your face.


Scheme XXXX XXXXXXXX AAAA
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 101000101 11010100 0010111 1101101 01011 11011 1110001 101010 11111 10111010 011110 100111010101 101101 10010101 0111010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 501
Words 101
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

When sleep can’t even evade the pain. Caught in a place between tragedy and grace.

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Written on December 02, 2023

Submitted by Jacobbenjaminray on December 05, 2023

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