Analysis of When You wish Upon a Star

Thomas Portman 1949 (detroit)



                         When You wish Upon a Star
FORTY MILLION LIVES HAVE BEEN ABORTED THUS FAR!
LET'S IDENTIFY EACH ONE WITH HIS/HER OWN LITTLE STAR.
SO, WHEN WE DWELL ON THE STARS AT NIGHT;
WE'LL REMEMBER THE ABORTED AND THAT HIDEOUS SITE!
WE CAN REFLECT ON THE DISTANCE OF EACH LITTLE LIGHT AND COMPARE IT WITH THE GROWING INSENSITIVITY OF MURDER IN GOD'S SIGHT!
HOW LONG WILL ITN LAST, HOW LONG WILL IT TAKE
BEFORE MAN RECTIFIES THIS HORRENDOUS MISTAKE?
SO, WHEN YOU WISH UPON A LITTLE STAR
MAY YOUR WISH BE MAN'S AWARENESS THAT HE HAS DRIFTED SO FAR!


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 559
Words 104
Sentences 6
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 420
Words per stanza (avg) 98

About this poem

Wrote two poems against abortion in the 80"s

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Written on July 26, 1986

Submitted by portmantom03 on December 31, 2023

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Thomas Portman

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