Analysis of The Mountain Splitter

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



He works in the glen where the waratah grows,
And the gums and the ashes are tall,
’Neath cliffs that re-echo the sound of his blows
When the wedges leap in from the mawl.

He comes of a hardy old immigrant race,
And he feels not the rain nor the drouth.
His sinews are tougher than wire; and his face
Has been tanned by the sun of the south.

Now doomed to be shorn of its glory at last
Is the stately old tree he attacks;
Its moments of life he is numbering fast
With the keen steady strokes of his axe.

Loud cracks at the butt; and the strong wood is burst;
And the splitter steps backward, and turns
His eyes to the boughs that move slowly at first
Ere they rush to their grave in the ferns.

He strips off the bark with slight effort of strength
And stretches it out on the weeds,
And marks off the trunk with a measure the length
Of the rails or the palings he needs.

The teeth of his crosscut so truly are set
That it swings from his elbow at ease;
And the song of the saw—I am hearing it yet—
Has the music of wind in the trees.

Strong blows on the wedge, and a rip and a tear,
And the log opens up to the butt;
And, spreading around through the pure mountain air,
Is the scent of the wood newly cut.

A lover of comfort and cronies is he;
And when the day’s work is behind,
A fire, and a yarn, and a billy of tea,
At the hut of the splitter you’ll find.

His custom is sought in the town by the range;
For well to the future he looks:
His cheques in an instant the storekeepers change;
And his name is the best on the books.


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH DIDI JKJK LMLM NONO PQPQ
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 110011011 001001011 11111001111 101010101 11101011001 011101101 11110110011 111101101 11111111011 101011101 11011111001 101101111 11101001111 00111001 11101111011 111111001 11101111011 01011101 01101101001 10110111 0111111011 11111111 001101111011 101011001 11101001001 001101101 01001101101 101101101 01011001011 01011101 010001001011 10110111 11011001101 11101011 1101100101 011101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,511
Words 313
Sentences 11
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 23, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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