Analysis of no.

Lisa Wilderman 1968 (Wisconsin)



no.
Touching the woman, hands on her most secret places.
This is fine, he says.
No, she says.
A pulling away, a tussle of sorts.
This is fine, he says.
No, she says.
And on and on until the end when, because she has no compass, she shrinks and shrinks.
And thinks: this is fine.


Scheme abCCdCCef
Poetic Form Nonet (22%)
Metre 1 1001011011010 11111 111 0100101011 11111 111 01010101101111101101 01111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 279
Words 63
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 206
Words per stanza (avg) 55

About this poem

This is a small story of a woman who has no sense of self and acquiesces to things even though she does not want them.

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Written on January 02, 2024

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Lisa Wilderman

I began writing poetry when I was a small girl. It all started with my two obsessions at the time: my grandparents’ Smith-Corona typewriter and clouds. I also possess a word-obsessed mind and a vivid imagination, so poetry writing feels natural to me. more…

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