Analysis of TWILIGHT ELEGY



Traveling the frigid asphalt of the ebon highway
Into the stark twilight of an Oppressive winter’s day
Rushing towards the shelter of our warm place

Leafless branches twisting in the cold evening breeze
Reach out with skeletal Fingers
Hoping to turn us from our journey

Snow covered hillsides beckon in the distance
Seen Through the Approaching gloom,
Yearning for that last lingering touch of vernal sunshine

Urban monoliths stare with cold dark eyes
As we hurry past, into the approaching night
Wishing they could join us on our journey

Streetlights bathe our way with soft golden glow
As tired wheels grind snow covered streets, searching for
The warm glow of that open door which welcomes us home.

Douglas Elliott Pierce 2022


Scheme AAX XXB XXX XXB XXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 10001011011 0101111010101 100101011011 101010001101 11110010 1011111010 1101100010 1100101 1011110011101 101011111 111010100101 10111111010 1110111101 110111101101 0111110111011 101001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 755
Words 133
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 101
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I began composing this poem while coming home from my grandson's hocky match on a cold march evening.

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Written on March 18, 2022

Submitted by GRAYWOLFDARK on January 09, 2024

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Douglas E. Pierce

born in New York city and grew up in and around Washington, D.C. Moved to Florida where I worked as a Hospital Administrator until my retirement in 2003. I currently live in Minnesota with my daughter and her family. more…

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