Analysis of 1/19/24 Part 3



When you're upset, how you really feel about me comes to light
You claim to have a high IQ,
but like a dying bulb,
you're not very bright.
You throw tantrums like an unruly child,
acting like you're the abused.
this shit is truly wild!
You tear me down with every word,
When I try to defend myself
You act like it's absurd!
Like you're the pefect, gifted one,
but let's face it,
Your mom hates you &
that's crazy considering
you're her one & only son.
It's unacceptable that I do drugs when I'm alone,
but it's totally OK for you to abuse your kid in someone elses home?
These double standards are really grinding my gears,
bet your son wouldn't have defied you
had you been a father all those years!
But you chose a fat drunk
to spend time with instead,
Do you see how it's not your mom's fault?
It's yours,
When will you get that through your head?


Scheme ABCADEDFGFHIJBHKLMJMBNOPN
Poetic Form Tetractys  (28%)
Metre 110111101011111 1111011 110101 11101 1110110101 1011001 111101 111111001 1111011 111101 1101101 1111 1111 1100100 101101 1010011111101 1110011111011101101 110101101011 111101011 111010111 111011 111101 111111111 11 11111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 853
Words 181
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 650
Words per stanza (avg) 163

About this poem

Just a third part to the first 2 who are titled with dates!

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Written on January 19, 2024

Submitted by ohdam.itssam on February 12, 2024

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Samantha O'Dell

I live a pretty intense life. People pleaser extraordinaire. Boy mom x2. Music is my life. I spend most of my time writing poetry or doodling on my bathroom mirror with chalk markers. haha more…

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