Analysis of Will Yer Write It Down for Me?

Henry Lawson 1867 (Grenfell) – 1922 (Sydney)



In the parlour of the shanty where the lives have all gone wrong,
When a singer or reciter gives a story or a song,
Where the poet’s heart is speaking to their hearts in every line,
Till the hardest curse and blubber at the thoughts of Auld Lang Syne;
Then a boozer lurches forward with an oath for all disguise—
Prayers and curses in his soul, and tears and liquor in his eyes—
Grasps the singer or reciter with a death-grip by the hand:
‘That’s the truth, bloke! Sling it at ’em! Oh! Gorbli’me, that was grand!
‘Don’t mind me; I’ve got ’em. You know! What’s yer name, bloke! Don’t yer see?
‘Who’s the bloke what wrote the po’try? Will yer write it down fer me?’

And the backblocks’ bard goes through it, ever seeking as he goes
For the line of least resistance to the hearts of men he knows;
And he tracks their hearts in mateship, and he tracks them out alone—
Seeking for the power to sway them, till he finds it in his own,
Feels what they feel, loves what they love, learns to hate what they condemn,
Takes his pen in tears and triumph, and he writes it down for them.


Scheme AABBCCDDEE FFGGHH
Poetic Form
Metre 001010101011111 1010111010101 1010111011101001 101010101011111 101010101111101 101001101010011 1010111011101 1011111111111 111111110111111 10111011111111 00111111010111 101110101011111 01111010111101 1010101111111011 111111111111101 111010100111111
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,106
Words 209
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 6
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 51
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 410
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Henry Lawson

Henry Lawson 17 June 1867 - 2 September 1922 was an Australian writer and poet Along with his contemporary Banjo Paterson Lawson is among the best-known Australian poets and fiction writers of the colonial period more…

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