Analysis of A Birthday Ode To My Mother



Mother, for you, these lines I pen,
Oh, dear, my first love, now and then.
Mother, you know me, inseparable we,
And thus, I share what the world should see.

For you gave me life, a gift untold,
Gold and silver may never hold.
You nourish me, a treasure true,
Finest gold can't compare to you.

Finally, you carry me, a gift divine,
Beyond all wealth, this love of mine.
Oh, my mother, my pride, my universe,
I love you more, an endless verse.

I may not always show it clear,
But know, my love for you is dear.
More than words can write or say,
Happy birthday, with love, this day.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 10111111 11111101 10111010001 011110111 111110101 10101101 11010101 10110111 10011010101 01111111 111011110 11111101 1111111 11111111 1111111 1011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 582
Words 130
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

The poem, written by Christen Kuikoua for his mother, is a heartfelt expression of love and gratitude. It celebrates the special bond between a mother and her child, emphasizing the profound impact of maternal love and the significance of the mother in the poet's life. The poem touches on themes such as the preciousness of life, the irreplaceable value of a mother's care, and the depth of emotions that may not always be overtly expressed but are deeply felt. Throughout the verses, the poet uses imagery and metaphor to convey the uniqueness of a mother's love, comparing it to priceless gifts like life itself, and contrasting it with material wealth. The rhythmic and lyrical qualities of the poem enhance its emotional impact, making it a beautiful tribute to the author's mother, especially on the occasion of her birthday. 

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Written on March 05, 2024

Submitted by ChristenKuikouafans on March 06, 2024

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