Analysis of So Bright Beauty

Alexander Jauch 1998 (Bakersfield California)



In a dream of fate, whispers of a sunlit grace,
Petals dance on zephyrs, a delicate ballet in space.
Moonlight weaves a sonnet, stars adorn the night,
Nature's palette unfolds, painting beauty in light.
In troubles not told, hues unfold,
Nature's canvas, a sight to behold.
Whispers of wind through leaves that sway,
A symphony of dawn, a brand new day.

Silken petals in a garden's dance,
Morning dew on each romance.
Mountains tall, majestic and free,
Echoes of beauty, for all to see.

Sunset paints the sky with fire,
Stars emerge, a cosmic choir.
Moonlight weaves its silver thread,
Beauty's tale, by night is spread.

In laughter shared, in kindness shown,
Beauty's essence, a seed is sown.
Within each heart, a radiant light,
A poem of beauty, day and night.


Scheme AABBCCDD EEFF GGHH IIBB
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 00111101011 10111001000101 1101010101 101001101001 01011101 101001101 10111111 0100110111 101000101 1011101 10101001 101101111 1101110 10101010 111101 111111 01010101 1100111 011101001 010110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 765
Words 153
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 148
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

It's a poem of care, love, and apology.

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Written on March 09, 2024

Submitted by Jauch924 on March 09, 2024

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