Analysis of After the war

Aisha Sheikh 2008 (Multan punjab)



When I went back to my village after
It was to totally changed my dear
Streams used to flow here was destroyed for forever
Burnt trees are giving a fear
Smile of people has been turned into tears
Bird used to chatter there
Now sound of weeping is what I can hear
After seeing my weeping dear
My eyes was also filled with tear
And When I heard about my dead peer
I am soldier but unaware
Where my all strength went from there
Why some time tear is better to bear


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111010 111100111 111111011010 1111001 1110111011 111101 1111011111 10101101 11110111 011101111 1110101 1111111 111111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 469
Words 99
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 370
Words per stanza (avg) 92
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Written on February 22, 2024

Submitted by mishamisha on February 07, 2024

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Aisha Sheikh

My name is Aisha Sheikh I live in layyah Punjab Pakistan. I'm a Muslim. I was born in city hospital multan punjab pakistan on 8 December 2008 My family consists of 4 members My father Sheikh Mehboob ullah My mother Misbah Noor My Brother in law Dr M. Jameel My sister Miftah Sheikh I love poetry since 2015 My hobby is painting poem writing philosophy writing I want to be a doctor more…

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