Analysis of The poem I never thought I'd write

Ruben Padilla-Baez 1987 (Carolina)



Blindfolded by ego I fell hard into the abyss,
surrendered let you rule over my heart, for you, it
bleeds
Keeps me up at night, I rage like a savage beast, still
I want you next to me, without you, I can not sleep
My love for you, kills my disdain, and to this day It
Remains, I will fight to the death for you,
even knowing that I would die in vain.


Scheme ABCDEBFG
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011101001 0101111011111 1 1111111101011 1111110111111 1111110101111 0111110111 1010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 350
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 8
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 266
Words per stanza (avg) 73

About this poem

This poem wrote itself from real feelings of what I'm currently going through. Might not even be a poem since I feel every word cutting through me but maybe someone can relate so here it is.

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Written on February 08, 2024

Submitted by coachredraider on February 08, 2024

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