Analysis of Where does your star lie?



I've been searching through the clouds.
Gazing upon the skies.
Peering through each constellation,
wondering where your star lies.

I've stumbled through each galaxy.
Tripped upon the moon.
Bewildered by this universe that has taken your star too soon.

I have seen your star shine.
I have witnessed it disappear.
But where your star lies,
still remains unclear.

Misplaced by the dark of space
Hoping your light will reappear.
Dumbfounded by the answer
I didn't realize was so near.

I've been searching through the clouds.
Gazing into my son's eyes.
Astonished  by my discovery.
I have found where your star lies.


Scheme Abxb cdd xebe xexe Abcb
Poetic Form
Metre 1110101 100101 1011010 1001111 11011100 10101 010111011101111 111111 1110101 11111 10101 0110111 1011101 1001010 11010111 1110101 1001111 010110100 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 618
Words 121
Sentences 15
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this 2 days after my Father passed. It is a conversation with myself asking/ answering all my questions in my sorrow.

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Written on September 27, 2023

Submitted by Stevenanderson809 on February 10, 2024

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