Analysis of Through the Looking Glass

Nikki Olivo 1987 (Morris County)



She’s never finished.
She’s never done.
Tears ,cries, and alarms,
She asks for help, and no one hears it,
Dishes, laundry, and dinner.
Wiping ,washing, and cleaning,
Don’t forget work!
Keys, purse, phone,
She can’t be late for work.
Her twenty minute coffee is her only salvation.
Looking through the mirror she sees.
New wrinkles, new creases, and new grey hair.
She looks back and remembers a girl,
Full of hope, dreams, and passion.
Did she forget?
A dream simply deferred ?
Or  simply a dream changed?
Looking through the mirror she sees,
The little girl always wanted to be a wife and a mom.
Did she see the big house and white picket fence?
Would she trade this dream for a different one?
She finishes her coffee and sees,
Time and dreams change and that's okay.
Off in the distance she hears,
The pitter patter of tiny feet approaching.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (24%)
Metre 11010 1101 11001 111101111 1010010 1010010 1011 111 111111 01010101010010 10101011 1101100111 111001001 1111010 1101 011001 110011 10101011 01011101101001 11101101101 11111101001 110001001 1011011 1001011 01101101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 173
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 650
Words per stanza (avg) 151

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Daily life portrayal. Life changes and dreams

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Written on February 13, 2024

Submitted by Nikkiluv29 on February 13, 2024

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Nikki Olivo

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