Analysis of It Started with a Noodle...then not
ロフィ・ノートのぼやけが消えていく
糸は淡い月を優しく縫う
モザイクタイルが壊れる、キットカット
揺れる木蓮の想い
シダーウィロー
香る樹脂
松の穴の憂鬱な毛皮
レーズン、フレンチクロワッサンの生地
詩の並んだ新聞プリントの帽子
木の葉がゆっくりと落ちる、デヴォワール。
Lofi notes blurs fade
Thread pale moon sew gently
Mosaic tile mislaid break, kit-kat
Magnolia thoughts as swing
Cedar-willow
Scented resin
Pine burrows melancholy fur
Raisin, french croissant dough
Poetry lined newspaper print cap
Eaves leaves fallen slowly, Devoir.
(Note: Kell is Devoir in French. Capellini is a type of pasta. The Japanese style of the poem is posted first as a translation, and the English is posted second.
| Scheme | XXX XAX BAXB X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1111 111110 010101111 010111 101 1010 1101001 10111 10011011 1110101 111101110111000111010110110010001011010 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 911 |
| Words | 102 |
| Sentences | 4 |
| Stanzas | 7 |
| Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 4, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 21 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 50 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 11 |
About this poem
It started with a noodle, then the noodle got deleted. Haikus were looked up to help compose the poem. It has a beat to it.
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