Analysis of A summers kiss!

Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)



I see them!                                        
 Jumping in the pools!
I am one of them!
 Only older now different groups!I
I still remember those summer days!
 Watching her jump into the water in her bathing suit as she looked my way!
Golden was always her gorgeous hair!
 Little stars by far were in her eyes!
She look intriguing!
 Intelligent, unique!
We spent more time kissing then asking each other personal questions!
 She liked to drink when she's with me!
At times in our lives we would go out to eat!
 Yet the feeling is sacred the way that we kiss!
The sweat from my palms as they rubbed her beautiful lips!
 The way that I kiss her is more than just the feeling involved!
It is the way that I feel her when we're hugging and alone!
 The way that I rub her!
Then we became a team!
 Nothing could touch us!
Alone in a dream!
 The kids are the facts of an unstoppable love that lasts!
So much more than just sex!
 This love I posses!
I will not ever betray her!
 She sleeps when I sleep!
I prefer to always bathe her!
 Getting my back is all I need!
When I'm on edge I won't jump or get scared!
 Alone or passed crowded I'll prosper and thrive!
I'm living and I live!
 Love is a secret at times!
A kiss made my day!
 A hug still is kind!
The little things matter!
 I appreciate mine!
So many others could have born all of my kids!
 Yet things are as they should be!
Lisa!
 A love more than a picture my everything my muse!
My vanilla my helper the only one that I needed!
 Oh, how we've grown!
Hi I'm "y"!
 Divorced and still true!
 


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,547
Words 337
Sentences 45
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 44
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,134
Words per stanza (avg) 293

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A short love poetical story!

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Written on March 11, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on March 11, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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