Analysis of A summers kiss!
Devon Bates 1980 (Norfolk)
I see them!
Jumping in the pools!
I am one of them!
Only older now different groups!I
I still remember those summer days!
Watching her jump into the water in her bathing suit as she looked my way!
Golden was always her gorgeous hair!
Little stars by far were in her eyes!
She look intriguing!
Intelligent, unique!
We spent more time kissing then asking each other personal questions!
She liked to drink when she's with me!
At times in our lives we would go out to eat!
Yet the feeling is sacred the way that we kiss!
The sweat from my palms as they rubbed her beautiful lips!
The way that I kiss her is more than just the feeling involved!
It is the way that I feel her when we're hugging and alone!
The way that I rub her!
Then we became a team!
Nothing could touch us!
Alone in a dream!
The kids are the facts of an unstoppable love that lasts!
So much more than just sex!
This love I posses!
I will not ever betray her!
She sleeps when I sleep!
I prefer to always bathe her!
Getting my back is all I need!
When I'm on edge I won't jump or get scared!
Alone or passed crowded I'll prosper and thrive!
I'm living and I live!
Love is a secret at times!
A kiss made my day!
A hug still is kind!
The little things matter!
I appreciate mine!
So many others could have born all of my kids!
Yet things are as they should be!
Lisa!
A love more than a picture my everything my muse!
My vanilla my helper the only one that I needed!
Oh, how we've grown!
Hi I'm "y"!
Divorced and still true!
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111 10001 11111 101011001 110101101 1001010100010111111 10110101 101110001 11010 010001 11111011011010010 11111111 110101111111 101011001111 0111111101001 011110111101001 110111101110001 011110 110101 10111 01001 01101110100111 111111 11110 11110010 11111 1011110 10111111 1111111111 01111011001 110011 1101011 01111 01111 010110 10101 110101111111 1111111 10 011101011011 101011001011110 1111 111 01011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,547 |
Words | 337 |
Sentences | 45 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 44 |
Lines Amount | 44 |
Letters per line (avg) | 26 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,134 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 293 |
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A short love poetical story!
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