Analysis of I WONDER PT 2



I wonder...
...If we are all part of God
And God is a l so in the trees
With part of God decided
To let it rain today?
I mean the people
In town sure don't
Want a flooded street
Yet the trees sure need
A nice drink

I wonder...
...If we are all God
Why is there war?
Does God hate Himself?
Or maybe God is sick
Trying to cut out a cancer.
A house divided can not stand

I wonder...
...If we are all God
Why isn't Earth Paradise?
If we are God surely all needs
Can be met.

I wonder...
...if we are all God
Why can't we figure out
All the mysteries of this life?
Why is death still a path we must walk?

I wonder...
...if we are all God
Why was a child crying in a manger?
Why were 5,000fed by a sea?
Why did an innocent man
Offer His life on a Cross?
Why did He say He'd come again?

I wonder...
...if we are all God
Who'll clean up this mess?
AMEN


Scheme Abxxxxxxxx ABxxxax ABxxx ABxxx ABaxxxc ABxc
Poetic Form
Metre 110 1111111 011011001 111110 111101 11010 0111 10101 10111 011 110 11111 1111 11101 110111 10111010 01010111 110 11111 110110 11111011 111 110 11111 111101 10100111 111101111 110 11111 1101100010 101101 1111001 1011101 11111101 110 11111 11111 01
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 873
Words 216
Sentences 27
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 10, 7, 5, 5, 7, 4
Lines Amount 38
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

Remember the former things,those of long ago I am God, and there is no other; I am God, and there is none like me. Isiah 46 9

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Written on March 28, 2024

Submitted by crucifiedinhim2 on March 28, 2024

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