Analysis of World with No Flaw



I live in a perfect world,
I can see the flawless sky,
Where my heart wants to fly high.

I can find happy faces,
In so many beautiful places.
I feel so glad,
There is no jealousy,
I hope it not to be a fallacy.

No - one blames each other,
All families are happy with their father and mother.
There are no old age homes and orphanages,
People are free from having grudges.

Kids are taught to be polite,
Teenagers avoid any kinds of fight.
Adults are understanding,
Avoiding any kind of misunderstanding.

Girls are not discouraged,
By family or friend.
No girl has to end their lives,
Seeing their career and passion end.

No-one is bias here,
There is no kind of fear.

I dreamt of a perfect world.
I told it to my peers .
But when it comes to reality,
I am all in tears.


Scheme ABB CCXDD EEFF GGHH XIXI XX AXDX
Poetic Form
Metre 1100011 1110101 1111111 1111010 011010010 1111 111100 1111110100 111110 11001101110010 11111101000 101111010 1111101 100110111 011010 01010110010 111010 110011 1111111 101010101 111101 111111 1110011 111111 1111110 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 774
Words 179
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 5, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on July 07, 2023

Submitted by shreoshi63 on March 29, 2024

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Shreoshi Roy

SHREOSHI ROY is a computer science engineering student. She is compiler of anthology named reflection of thoughts and co-author of anthology named "FEARLESS". She has a keen interest in writing poems. She expresses her feelings in the form of writeups. She has a dream that some day her own book will get published. She hopes her audience will like her thoughts. May she achieve to maintain a place in the hearts of readers. more…

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