Analysis of AS I SIT AND WRITE



As I sit here and write
trying to figure out whats
the difference between wrong and right, while trying to figure out
what feels right, with the light
shining oh so bright, that it
evens shines through the night.

As I sit and draw a blank
I imagine myself walking
along a long plank,
to the pretty blue sea
that's deep enough just for me,
that I can float and be free.

As I sit and write
wondering what I'm going
to say, I guess all I that,
I can do is pray that I have,
no more stormy, rainy, cloudy
dark, gloomy days.

As I sit and stare,
out the window up at the clear
blue sky, I see myself flying
up so high, with arms stretched
wide, not worrying because I have
nothing to hide behind these
pretty brown eyes.

As I sit and dream, staring at
this amazing, beautiful stream I imagine myself floating
along the river, keeping me from
this weird creepy shiver,
that is all shades of silver.

As I sit and write
hoping and praying that
everything is going to be
alright, just as long as
I sit here and right.


Scheme axxaxa bcbddd Acefdx xxcxfxx ecxgg Aedxa
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1011010 0100011011101101 111101 1011111 101101 1110101 1010110 01011 101011 1101111 1111011 11101 1001110 1111111 11111111 11101010 1101 11101 10101101 1111110 111111 111000111 1011011 1011 11101101 101010011010110 010101011 111010 1111110 11101 100101 1011011 11111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,013
Words 214
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 7, 5, 5
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on April 02, 2024

Submitted by bubblescrocker2023 on April 02, 2024

1:04 min read
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Brittany Crocker

I'm 34 yrs old. Love to write poetry. I express my emotions and/feelings through poetry more…

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