Analysis of My View



I look upon my hands for scars,
View the world I have created so far,
As tears run down my face,
Wonder if…we could ever get along,
Together as a human race.

I’ll have to wait and see,
And help those
Who pray to me.

Through thick and thin,
My time will come again.
Down from the stars,
To heal the world,
For which I bear these scars.


Scheme AXBXB CXC XXAXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11011111 1011101011 111111 1011110101 01010101 111101 011 1111 1101 111101 1101 1101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 346
Words 81
Sentences 5
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 84
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

Wrote it on a whim, as it traveled through my head.

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Submitted by Jimmy_Montemayor on April 07, 2024

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