Analysis of What Sense Does It Make



What sense does it make.
To live and exist.
Initiating bigotry and hatred.
When many medicate.
In the hope to escape,
The truth and reality to replace...
What is witnessed to observe.
A teaching taught from birth to serve.

What sense does it make.
To daily numb away this pain that aches.
As so many fake,
Having a 'Christian' faith.
Pretentiously revealed to expose it shown,
Themselves devoted hypocrites.
Around the World well known.
Committing conflicts to then self inflict,
Proof and evidence...
Of an evil to spread it.
As if to want and wish,
More division to get!

What is the sense made of this.
That normalizes sickened mentalities.
Claiming to blame their insecurities,
On others received.
Others wanting to defend,
The right to live...
Peaceful lives as they please.
According as stated in the 1st Amendment.

Documented, adopted and cemented.
December 15, 1791.
As one of 10 Amendments.
That constitutes The Bill of Rights.
Known by those,
Unexpected these days...
Not to fight or defend living their lives.
While others picked and elected to rise,
In positions of power.
Deciding who or who should not,
Express their patriotism to a country.
Because of their ethnicity,
Color of skin.
Or an image that symbolizes to idolize,
Lies to deceive an imitating of a life.
To believe what has been faked to fiction,
Represents the reality of democracy!

What sense does it make,
To medicate a hatred.
As if it remains to benefit,
The very ones who create...
Their own mental illness to normalize,
A wrong way of life.
In the hope to erase,
What God has designed as is to stay!


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11001 0100100010 11010 001101 0101011 1110101 01011111 11111 1101011111 11101 100101 10110111 0101010 010111 0100111101 10100 1110111 111101 101011 1101111 1100101 101110100 11001 1010101 0111 101111 010110001010 1000100010 010 111010 1100111 111 01011 1111011011 1101001011 0010110 1011111 01110001010 01110100 1011 11101100110 11011100101 1011111110 0101010100 11111 110010 111011100 0101101 111010110 01111 001101 111011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,584
Words 328
Sentences 36
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 8, 12, 8, 17, 8
Lines Amount 53
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 248
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Written on April 07, 2024

Submitted by lpahtillah on April 07, 2024

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