Analysis of Observation And Edutainment

The Prophet Obblonge 1978 (Abilene, TX)



You've been doing that intently for hours

I'm not sure what the actions add up to

Nor the sounds they might make if One was to hear them

Yes, I'm in the same room

Same spot, the recliner

Rocking, pushing with my foot, curled sideways

Nary a glance over my way - you're busy

I have no idea what you're doing

Its not that I'm not interested

Just far too busy watching your movements

Maybe you'll tell me later...


Scheme X X X X A X X X X X A
Poetic Form
Metre 11101010110 1111010111 101111111111 110011 110010 101011111 10011011110 1110101110 11111100 1111010110 1011110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 443
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

Originally published on DeviantArt. Written for my missing fiancé, Patty Ann Roberts, who was last seen in Lake Orion, Michigan in the company of the white supremacist narcissistic abuser she was trying to escape.

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Written on July 03, 2022

Submitted by TheProphetObblonge on April 14, 2024

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The Prophet Obblonge

Erupting with preaching performances, The Prophet Obblonge explains, proclaims, transmutes, and delivers clarity to the masses for their edification and to bring awareness to the still uncertain fate of his beloved fiancé, last seen with a white supremacist narcissistic abuser in Michigan. Fans of horror fiction, true life drama, comedy, and pointed social commentary alike find Obblonge’s insightful, exasperated gospel to be an invigorating, motivating experience presented without fear of reproach or regret. What’s your problem? Issues resolved. Crises averted. Wonders explained. Be amazed. Lost? Depressed? Questions? The answers are waiting…. Everything is the repetition offa pattern. Everything. You can pretend you have free will. You can pretend you have a soul, or even consciousness. And then you can open the envelope I gave you and read what I said you were gonna pretend. Toldja. Five albums released by Obblonge Box and more. Tap the three words into any search engine and uncover varied works in many mediums. One cannot be shielded from the truth. Official artist channel: YouTube@TheProphetObblonge more…

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