Analysis of REMADE

Barry Green Jr 1973 (Florida)



I've been remade, from the man I was
If you see righteousness,  it's only because
He who began a good work in me
Is faithful to complete it for all to see

I know my faults, all my frailty, things that mar
Tis only by amazing grace that I've run this far
But that same grace lifts me up high
That I now soar through the clear sky

You dare judge what God has made!
Do you wonder that I stand unafraid?
I stand on a foundation you can never shake,
Foolish dreamer, you must awake!

Yes I was everything you blandly accuse
A liar, a thief, untrusted,  quick to abuse
But God broke the man I used to be
And remade me, reborn to be free

Who are you to call me to account?
My sin is redeemed whatever amount
I am a Saint as I once was a sinner
And the damnation I lost, made me a winner

When you see me you see God in me
Where you saw Chains, you see now I'm free
I'm new and you see not what was old
That is the news  I've  continually told
AMEN


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGBB HHII BBJJX
Poetic Form
Metre 110110111 11110011001 110101101 11010111111 11111110111 1101010111111 11111111 11111011 1111111 111011101 111001011101 10101101 1111011001 0100111101 111011111 001111111 111111101 111011001 11011111010 000101111010 111111101 111111111 110111111 11011010001 01
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 954
Words 210
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 120
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

Colossians 3 10 and have put on the new self, which is being renewed in knowledge in the image of its Creator.

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Written on April 14, 2024

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