Analysis of UNLOCKING TRUST
The One-Somebody might be waiting for you somewhere. Satisfied, happy-sad moments await somewhere. Somewhere - you can know, because you can feel it - a strange-secret cogwheel is turning around your Life; a motionless glass ball in which you are also inside, not just a group of wretched minute-men ready to joke around.
Somewhere, the music of the squinting raindrops hits between the symmetries of your face, and the sure suspicion, like the heartbeat of a bud, feels the fulfillment of immortal romances in the body of the other. It is true that Time's deluge of executioner-smelling water has often unfairly swept you away and crushed you; in your clumsy, stumbling, hesitant movements, there was always the preordained useless impulse to defend yourself. The sign of Sagittarius is constantly evolving and changing - and yet Fate has never been kind to you.
It would be nice if someone else would pay attention to your water-sounding taps inside. Be careful not to swallow your shadow-self! Manipulations with a rat's appetite poison not only the wandering mind, but also the crypt-smelling struggles of everyday life. Nostalgia has been erected as protective walls around your shell-loneliness, so that the painful sting of useless life can never reach you again.
From your love - maybe - one day you will grow a rose tree that will grow abundantly; there are many tiny petals on it. Be careful! Don't let your life, which you said was just a pathetic playground, accompany you anymore! Every loss is a blind window, Be careful not to let absolute adults devour your childhood! Unexpectedly - it would be better - if someone finally looked at you, who knows your essence exactly and precisely without unnecessary words!
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Metre | 0110111011110101100111111011111011011100111010011011110011101110101101101 101010101101011110010101011011001010100100010101011111101010010101100101101011011010010010111001101010101011111000100100111101111 11111111101011101010111011101110010101101011001001110011010110110101101010101011110011010111011101101 111101111101111101001110101011110111111111001010100101100110110110111100101011010011110111001111111001000100101001 |
Characters | 1,729 |
Words | 293 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 4 |
Letters per line (avg) | 347 |
Words per line (avg) | 72 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 347 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 72 |
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