Analysis of YOU and I



They are eternities between our meetings
They are instants of being together
Space where there is no touch
With a chain of thoughts about your closeness and dearness
Wth a chain-needing of your warmth and tenderness
With a chain-wanting of your calling arms and dizzying lips
Essence where there is the whole life
With our souls and bodies merging
With no beginning or end of the Universe
With everything unfathomable and clear
My half longing for your half to make the whole Unity


Scheme ABCADEFGHIJ
Poetic Form
Metre 111011010 111110010 111111 101110111001 101101110100 101101110101001 10111011 110101010 11010111010 1100100001 11101111101100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 481
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 397
Words per stanza (avg) 83
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Submitted by Natdolkar on April 19, 2024

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