Analysis of Far Away Dream

Charles Edward York 1966 (Saigon, Vietnam)



Far Away Dream

Love is a far away dream
A distant boat on a horizon
Hurt and loneliness
Ache in agony
Hopelessness glides
Slowly across the waves
In search of a peaceful shore
And my longing swells
In a restless tide
As I drift out to sea.

Despair becomes a dirge
Dripping in melancholy
Drenched with my weighty tears
From so much sadness
Crying beneath the sky
Validation eludes me
As solitude cages
My smile in a prison cell
A jail face appears
Where my dignity used to be.

In your space is darkness
Absence too great to measure
Hollows out my happiness
Laughter long gone
Runs away an orphan
My head in my hands
Echoes weeping in silence
Your lover’s kiss is
A foreign object
Fallen from my lips.

Nighttime now abides with me
And sleep eludes
A lost child of innocence
Your embrace gone
I wrap myself
Around in a blanket of
Worn out wishes
Affection replaced by
Your icy rejection
Love is a far away dream.

Copyright © 2024 Charles Edward York
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Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1101011 010110010 10100 10100 1001 100101 0110101 01101 00101 111111 010101 100100 111101 11110 100101 010011 11010 1100101 01101 11100111 011110 1011110 1011100 1011 101110 11011 1010010 11011 01010 10111 110111 0101 0111100 1011 111 0100101 1110 01011 110010 1101011 101101 111110111101100010101010010111111010100100010110010100101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,178
Words 224
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 10, 10, 10, 10, 2
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

The hopeless feeling being alone without love brings.

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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by charlesedwardyork on April 19, 2024

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Charles Edward York

Charles Edward York is an author and poet activist living in Plano, Texas. He’s written over 1400 poems and published 17 books of poetry. Born in Vietnam and raised a citizen in Dallas, Texas, he writes poems that include the subjects of love and relationships, nature, social justice, including police violence against African-Americans and minorities, astronomy and others. more…

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