Analysis of hotline



It’s going amazing
The minutes pass by as we actually have a real conversation
It feels like I’m there with her
She confides in me
I feel hopeful
I feel so confident
I shouldn’t have been so prideful
She explains the Heroin entering her system as she feels dizzy
I stop and think
It’s too late
My heartbeat grows faster
But her’s doesn’t.


Scheme ABCDEFEDGHCF
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 0101111100101010 1111110 10101 1110 111100 111111 101010010001011110 1101 111 11110 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 350
Words 63
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 269
Words per stanza (avg) 63

About this poem

This is a captivating piece that captures a snapshot of an intense, emotional conversation that swings from hopeful to tragic. It's intimate, with a direct and personal tone, focusing on real and vivid experiences. The content moves from a connection and confidence to a sudden, stark realization about the other person’s situation, contrasting the emotional states of the speaker and the other character powerfully.

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Written on March 07, 2023

Submitted by melaina on April 22, 2024

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