Analysis of Notes from America's free section



"Notes from America's free section"

Note 1 'experiment'

 Abandonment soul whimper. Un-moved soul-less blurt. Voices of elsewhere. Depraved Depression. Comparative condition. Couch surrounded by dark mirrored windows. Depraved soul. Uncertain zen. Hard to obtain hair style.

Note 2 'Heat and Light'

Rolling through the hexagonal courtyards. Atrium after atrium in an annex.

Waves across the donning from the sky. In a self made 'dribbling' jewelled ball cap “ I could do anything in a space like this, I could instantly unfold my possible imaginings." Synthesized and re-synthesized into these hyperdimensional objects, superspace spun a galactic ecology of stars, a swarming hive of dragonfly constellations.  A sensitive physics experiment in the midst of a drunken bacchanal. Lungs that wave the universe.  

Note 3 ' Traveling as a true Self'

Roller coasters, coasting roads,

large rolling waves, we would like to be 

As much as we used to be.

A breeze to the deepest of the lungs all about.

Stars like masts and a red sparkling red sparks arc.

Standing in love in the parking lot to the hori-zion.

Spiralling arc of orange in the sky, on the ground, and in the insides

Easiest spirals of warmth in a cheering time.

Note 4 'Reunion'

A bright haze of light

A jaunt around the area

Refreshing relaxation, refreshing the calibrations

The patio for resting

A long warm wash of sun

Breathing and clouds

The windows becoming statically bound

The astro turf ripples like waves on the coast

Held onto holding on by patio lawn chairs

In a heavenly nirvana

So happy to be together in the heigh’ city

Simply wafting as the clouds,

so close to the streaks of white,

as if there is an embrace.

The warm daze of summers time

A trickle of songs to master

The duality that seems for-ever “All is lost if it’s never heard, and all is lost once told.”

Note 5 'friends'

a lighter passed
between friends.

Note 6 'time and perspiration '

Through the doors of time and perspiration

a journey; and how we sprang slowly.

People with some sense of Knowledge,

The dew drips above the ground.

Note 7 'drive'

Drive through the fields of golden dreams and wonder, this wandering.

At night the fields are held by the shimmering darkness.

sung to by the crickets beside the owls

All the insect kingdom seems to pulsate

A sweet sound that helps and the air

to gently go in breaths to the moon

A rail road stretching again into the horizon

Behind the train trestle a town rest'

Note 8 'amber waves of grain'

A justice is the friend of the Magistrate

Amidst the amber waves of grain

Where depression is in session

Ha, well depresion is a session.

Ripple the walls of the lawless.

Our feet wandered us

The white of the mountains

Note 9 'proper'

Free and properly feeling.

The dreams allow for glimpses of proper life.

Bright smiles across many places.

 “Oh yess then the minds errors can be fixed, like  digital defragmentation! The heart is good at defragmentation! (receives soup)”

Note 11 ' Sometimes'

Sometimes the only way to live

is to focus on what can be seen.

When a search for truth is a search for blindness,

and a law or rule for all may be as the well...

May be as the well seen.

Yet the notion of the spirit immortal

is unheard, unseen, and for no one.

Note 12 ' youthful'

Past the english turnstyles of youth

Chats of fasion

Note 13 'Telephone poles'

Posters on telephone poles

Chalk on sidewalk

Wall of wonder

Note14 'Only a desert'

Into a room

Chair across the way


Scheme A B X C D X X X E E X X A X F A C G D H A I J X X G E I C X F K X L XL A A E X J M H N X B X X A X O X O A A N N X K H X X X X M P N X P Q A Q X A R R X K X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 110100110 10100 010011011111101101010010001010101110100110101110111 1101 10100100110010100011 1010101010011100111111100011111100011100110011001111011001001001101011101001001001000011010010111010 11001011 1010101 110111111 1111111 011010101101 11100110111 100100101101010 100111000110100001 100101100101 1010 01111 01010100 01001001001 010110 011111 1001 01001011 01011011101 11010111011 00100010 1101101000110 1010101 1110111 1111101 0111101 01011110 001001111011111101011111 11 0101 011 110010 101110010 010011110 10111110 0110101 11 110111010101100 1101111010010 1110100101 10110111 01111001 110101101 0111001010010 010110011 110111 0101011010 01010111 10101010 1111010 10011010 101101 011010 110 1010010 01011101101 11011010 111011011111001011111011 101 01010111 111011111 10111101110 001111111101 111011 10101010010 101010111 110 1010111 111 1101 101101 111 1110 110010 0101 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 3,701
Words 750
Sentences 40
Stanzas 80
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 81
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 8

About this poem

I wrote notes while traveling in America

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Written on June 01, 2016

Submitted by cpennock on April 27, 2024

Modified by cpennock on April 27, 2024

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