Analysis of SEA CREATURE




Deep, deep down, in the sea, where nothing else ought to be
There lives a creature that shouldn’t be

This creature lives on dreams you see
This creature deep beneath the sea

When all is still in dead of night
When children sleep with thoughts of fright

This creature leaves the salty sea
And looks for dreamers, like you and me

It isn’t good to dream, you see
It draws the creature from the sea
And when it comes on cool still nights
It’s bound to be a scary sight.

I did not know it was around
Until I heard the swishing sound
The darkness held it’s ghostly fright
I knew it was, just out of sight

And with a step, the stars were gone
There was no light, there was no sun
 I told myself this cannot be
 Not to a dreamer just like me

There was not fear or despair
The fear of darkness was not there
The creature had instilled in me
 A sense that it would care for me

Deep in the sea we traveled, we.
And talked of things we could not see
A thousand nights, a thousand days
We traveled on beneath the waves

My heart is filled with love for thee
For there is only one of me
All my life I roamed the sea
And found none to compare to thee

There used to be a tribe of me
We’d sing and dance beneath the sea
But now there’s one and only one
And now my day has almost come

Darkness has come over me
A darkness that is calling me
To deeper places neath the sea
To seek the ones who’ve gone from me

And now my work is almost done
And when I’m gone there will be none
None to share the dreams you see
The dreams of lovers of the sea

John Ricard 3/21/05


Scheme AA AA BB AA AAXB CCBB XDAA EEAA AAXX AAAA AADX AAAA DDAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110011101111 11010111 11011111 11010101 11110111 11011111 11010101 011101101 1111111 11010101 01111111 11110101 11111101 0111011 01011101 11111111 01010101 11111111 1111101 11010111 1111101 01110111 01010101 01111111 10011101 01111111 01010101 11010101 11111111 11110111 1111101 01110111 11110111 11010101 11110101 0111111 1011101 01011101 11010101 11011111 0111111 01111111 1110111 01110101 101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,628
Words 332
Sentences 3
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Written on March 21, 2005

Submitted by Ncrebel44 on April 27, 2024

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