Analysis of You're the moon

jahnvi 2008 (Delhi)



"You're the moon, always in my mind,
So beautiful, your light I find.
I could watch you every night,
With my eyes, in your soft light.

With music playing in my head,
Seeing you stops my heart's tread.
The moon makes nights so fine,
In its glow, we dance, just in time.

Even with lights around, it seems,
It's just you and me in dreams.
In the moon's light, everything's right,
You're the moon, my guiding light.


Scheme AABB CCXX DDBB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 1011011 11001111 11111001 1110111 11010011 1011111 011111 01111101 10110111 1110101 0011101 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 413
Words 90
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 26

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