Analysis of Responsibility



"Czy ty mnie słyszysz?"

Does the booming sound ever reverberate
in the shallowness of your empty shell, the way it does me?

Does the sharp string of endless wails
cut through you, the way my consciousness is continuously sliced?

"Wiem że boli, ale jestem na skraju"

Is to bear this, something you would condemn your brightest sun with?


Scheme A XX AX X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 10101100100 001001110101111 10111101 1110111001010001 1111111 111110110111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 377
Words 76
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Written on May 04, 2024

Submitted by jonesz on May 03, 2024

Modified by jonesz on May 03, 2024

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