Analysis of Ocean's Heart



droptop wind escapes my grasp
as blue breezes engulf my senses
the albatross winks as I squint
Ray-Bans capture an unvaluable gift
sunsets journey a longing quest

magenta sunset unwinding fast
opening it up on a steep incline
then gliding like the ocean waves
in neutral down to the winding cays
smelling salts gift in decay

the sunset was a rock stars dream
made it just in time, close to the rivers stream
blues and grays with orange in-between
storm clouds rolling in as scarabs dart
raining beauty down on ocean's heart


Scheme XAXXX XXXAX BBXCC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111 111001110 0101111 1110111 1100101 01010101 1001110101 11010101 010110101 1011001 0110111 11101110101 101110001 11100111 101011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 525
Words 94
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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Ocean drives are always the best.

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Written on June 22, 2023

Submitted by Huntero on May 06, 2024

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Hunter Aydelott

Besides writing I like underwater photography, doing mosaics, and playing keyboard in my friend's band. more…

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