Analysis of The Idea of Order at Key West

Wallace Stevens 1879 (Reading) – 1955 (Hartford)



She sang beyond the genius of the sea.
The water never formed to mind or voice,
Like a body wholly body, fluttering
Its empty sleeves; and yet its mimic motion
Made constant cry, caused constantly a cry,
That was not ours although we understood,
Inhuman, of the veritable ocean.

The sea was not a mask. No more was she.
The song and water were not medleyed sound
Even if what she sang was what she heard,
Since what she sang was uttered word by word.
It may be that in all her phrases stirred
The grinding water and the gasping wind;
But it was she and not the sea we heard.

For she was the maker of the song she sang.
The ever-hooded, tragic-gestured sea
Was merely a place by which she walked to sing.
Whose spirit is this? we said, because we knew
It was the spirit that we sought and knew
That we should ask this often as she sang.

If it was only the dark voice of the sea
That rose, or even colored by many waves;
If it was only the outer voice of sky
And cloud, of the sunken coral water-walled,
However clear, it would have been deep air,
The heaving speech of air, a summer sound
Repeated in a summer without end
And sound alone. But it was more than that,
More even than her voice, and ours, among
The meaningless plungings of water and the wind,
Theatrical distances, bronze shadows heaped
On high horizons, mountainous atmospheres
Of sky and sea.
It was her voice that made
The sky acutest at its vanishing.
She measured to the hour its solitude.
She was the single artificer of the world
In which she sang. And when she sang, the sea,
Whatever self it had, became the self
That was her song, for she was the maker. Then we,
As we beheld her striding there alone,
Knew that there was never a world for her
Except the one she sang and, singing, made.

Ramon Fernandez, tell me, if you know,
Why, when the singing ended and we turned
Toward the town, tell why the glassy lights,
The lights in the fishing boats at anchor there,
As the night descended, tilting in the air,
Mastered the night and portioned out the sea,
Fixing emblazoned zones and fiery poles,
Arranging, deepening, enchanting night.

Oh! Blessed rage for order, pale Ramon,
The maker's rage to order words of sea
Words of the fragrant portals, dimly-starred,
And of ourselves and our origins,
In ghostlier demarcations, keener sounds.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101010101 0101011111 10101010100 11010111010 1101110001 111101101 01010100010 0111011111 010100111 1011111111 1111110111 1111010101 0101000101 1111010111 11101010111 0101010101 11001111111 11011110111 1101011101 1111110111 11110011101 11110101101 11110010111 01101010101 101111111 0101110101 0100010011 0101111111 11010101001 01001110001 0100100111 110101001 1101 110111 01111100 1101010110 110101101 0111011101 101110101 110111101011 111010101 1111100110 0101110101 0101011111 1101010011 0101110101 01001011101 10101010001 100101101 10010101001 0101000101 111110101 0101110111 1101010101 01001010100 01010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,260
Words 428
Sentences 21
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 6, 23, 8, 5
Lines Amount 56
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 301
Words per stanza (avg) 71
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Wallace Stevens

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