Analysis of I went to fetch water from the lake



I went to fetch water from the lake, but my love wont let me, O mother!
Kneading my firm breasts, he lusted for the nectar of my lips, O mother!
I went to fetch water from the lake, but my love wont let me, O mother!

'How did you hurt your lips' my mother-in-law suspiciously asks.
'It was my girl friend's nail as she was helping me with the pots'
I went to fetch water from the lake, but my love wont let me, O mother!

I had gone in a great hurry but my love held me back,
It is excellent to attain Narsaiyya's Lord,
For he made me like himself, O mother!
I went to fetch water from the lake, but my love wont let me, O mother!


Scheme AaA xxA xxaA
Poetic Form
Metre 111110101111111110 101111101010111110 111110101111111110 1111111100101001 111111111101101 111110101111111110 11100110111111 1110010111 1111101110 111110101111111110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 628
Words 132
Sentences 8
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 4
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 13
Letters per stanza (avg) 157
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Narsinh Mehta

Narsinh Mehta, also known as Narsi Mehta or Narsi Bhagat , was a 15th-century poet-saint of Gujarat, India, notable as a bhakta, an exponent of Vaishnava poetry. He is especially revered in Gujarati literature, where he is acclaimed as its Adi Kavi (Sanskrit for "first among poets"). His bhajan Vaishnav Jan To was Mahatma Gandhi's favourite and has become synonymous with him.  more…

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