Analysis of Psychic Panorama



Under water fall the god is bleeding
From all his veins tonight
Under deep blue sea the seahorse is riding
A ball of fire tonight
Under crescent moon the raven of love is howling
Just to start a fight tonight

That’s all under the moon a sober
Drunk to immortal death besides a hollow tide tonight
Under water fall the lords of love are bleeding
From all their veins tonight
Under subconscious mind a monkey of grief
Is jumping to start over to end his life tonight

Under chill cold summer avalanche
The broken one is buried into the mass of snow tonight
Under the yellow pale sun
A looser psychic pathetic one is writing
A song of his broken life tonight
And always
He rolls on to this writings


Scheme ABABAB XBABXB XBXABXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010101110 111101 1011101110 0111001 1010101011110 1110101 111001010 11010101010101 101010111110 111101 10010101011 1101110111101 10111010 010111001011101 1001011 010100101110 011110101 01 1111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 678
Words 130
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 7
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 188
Words per stanza (avg) 43
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Submitted by Azalea Spirit on October 04, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Abinash Parajuli

Abinash Parajuli is a Nepali poet, novelist, music critic and a journalist. Currently, he's acting a CEO/Executive Editor at MuzBuzz Monthly Magazine. more…

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