Analysis of Inside Out



I spit this on the mic to flow oh so prolific
What's the since in believing in Christ
If ur just gonna take him out of Christmas...
Dish the wish list...u can't re gift this...
Can't unwish this...
Hold the phone put it to ur ear so i may call
You on this...
I don't mean to phone straight home...
Put ur wish bone on this...
I'm in this rap for tit and tat cross my t dot my i's...
Bring that right back...
I said I'm in this rap for tit and tat...
I'm diving for the truth but
it seems I'm getting lies just stuffed full of cotton...
So I start digging in deeper let the lord be my finder as well as my keeper...
Im just the seeker...
I use to just be the peeker I was searching for it all...
But the only thing I was able to do was watch it all fall...
Behind it I would crawl and cry about how I almost had it all...
That's all....
The devil wanted me to give up...
But my success was simply based off of me getting up and moving on...
So I left my baggage behind for claims...
Now I'm onward bound to my success full stead ahead ....
All aboard this train to success...
I use to walk out my house...couldn't see my path so foggy
Now I'm gliding down my path so hands free cuz god is handling me....
Can't u see what I see my cup now runneth over...
All brand new...
My home turned to a castle I can see the riches the success...
That the lord has for me...
He set it all up now it's slowly falling down for me...
I use to bit the hand that feed me
now I shake it and hold it so firmly he guides me down the path...
Hand in hand...makes me feel so securely...
So surely not late I thought...
But maybe not so early
He came at the right time to save me from myself like a goalie...
So holy...
Hollie mollie I use to feel so lonely...
But now I feel so secure its like I'm held down
held together by a force much stronger than gravity
Yet I feel so free like I'm on the moon zero gravity...
Helped my outta all my problems...
Had so much sin I was indebt to sin...
Had to look within to get out...
That's when I found God and he turned me inside out


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111011111010 101001001 11110111110 10111111 111 101111111111 111 1111111 111111 10111101111111 1111 1110111101 1101011 111101111110 111100101011110111110 11010 11111011110111 1010111101111111 0111110101111111 11 010101111 110111011111010101 1111100111 1110111011101 10111101 1111111111110 1110111111111101 111111111110 111 1111010111010001 101111 11111111010111 111101111 1111011110111101 101111010 1101111 1101110 111011111111010 110 10101111110 111110111111 10101011101100 111111110110100 11101110 111111111 11101111 111110111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,103
Words 442
Sentences 41
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 47
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,543
Words per stanza (avg) 422
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Submitted by hitalot on June 20, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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