Analysis of My sorrows,I cry

Lucy Brown 1981 (Denton,TX)



I'm so lonely now and I don't know how
to get it back to good.
Everyone here seems to be caught
up in themselves.
I'm the one that they blame.
Sorry,doesn't  mean an thing.
With all this blame,turns into shame,
it's harder to get through the days.
So,broken down and alone down my roads,
standing,still,and unsteady to who I am.
I'm so wrapped up with shame
to things I can not win.
I'm sorry for the way I am.
Sorry,for being so cold for things I say.
I never thought to look back for
all the things I did.
I seem to screw up everything.
Even now when I got everything
I been waiting for.
Sight to knowing how to care,faith of who I am..
My will to find everything that I am,
is taken from my every mistake.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110101111 111111 1011111 1001 101111 1111 1111011 11011101 11001111 10101111 111111 111111 11010111 110111111 11011111 10111 1111110 10111110 11101 11101111111 111110111 1101110001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 692
Words 146
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 537
Words per stanza (avg) 140
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Submitted by Lucybrown1381 on January 14, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Lucy Brown

Been writing poetry since age 12 year 1995 telling my inspiration of emotional journey that I wish never forget and my poetic adventures as I walk my roads to the path of who I am and memories to countless hours that are mine and cherished people I love along way. Store to who I'am with my joyous time along with sorrows of pain. more…

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