Analysis of Vortex

ROMA CAGIMARAL 1987 (Cali)



There is like a sensation in the look
when the form becomes suspended.
In contemplating the environments the facades
in talking for an hour with nothing,
there is a feeling
when the action is lost.

And it is found
And finds herself
fluttering between a gesture that are all
in an envelope of time and places
circular, undulating, maritime ...
what does it do or finish
because everything comes together in the channel
of an archetypal vortex,
in that great spiral that others
they called dragon or serpent or
movement…

and there is like a rhythm between things
a suction like black sun
that the wood returns,
 which makes zero less than infinity.

There are beings who only wish to launch themselves towards their origin.


Scheme XXXAAX XXXXXXXXXXX XBXX B
Poetic Form
Metre 1110010001 10101010 010000100001 0101110110 11010 101011 0111 0101 10001010111 011011010 10010010 1111110 011010100010 1111010 01110110 11101101 10 0111010011 010111 10101 1110110100 111011011101011100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 701
Words 124
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 11, 4, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 146
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Submitted by omara.64336 on January 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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