Analysis of The Sinking Ship

Shivam Chahal 2005 (Delhi)



Today I was thinking
My ship was sinking
I could see no hope
Came an invisible rope

And the second I touched it
Things got little better
And later when I thought it
My eyes got wetter

The bird inside
Wants to kiss the sky
But the man is shy
And I cannot figure why

The man is like a clock
It changes itself it tries to walk
But after not so long
It comes where it belongs

And they push him hard
No one is there to guard
That delicate part
It's hurt so bad
And it gets so mad
That he hurts himself
But he can't stand that

Tomorrow I'll be thinking
My ship won't be sinking
The weather might be clear
But still I'll drop tears


Scheme AABB CDCD XEEE XXXX FFXGGXX AAXX
Poetic Form
Metre 011110 11110 11111 1101001 0010111 111010 0101111 11110 0101 11101 10111 0110101 011101 110011111 110111 111101 01111 111111 11001 1111 01111 11101 11111 011110 111110 010111 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 598
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 7, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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