Analysis of Please, Break Down That Wall



Please, Break Down That  Wall (Dedicated To Drew  Borg).

I want to be the one to hold you
and let you know I'll always be there.
I want to be the one you talk to
when you just need someone to listen.
Please, break down that wall and let me in!
I want to be the one you share your
ups and downs with each and every day.
I want to be the one to fill your world
with love and happiness for the rest of your life.
Please, break down that wall and let me in!
I want to be the one to say, "I love you,
no-matter-what obstacles come our way."
I want to be the one you come home to and say
you're very happy to say that I'm yours.
Please, break down that wall and let me in!
I want to be the one you choose to be with
to share your hopes and dreams.
Most of all, I want to be the one you want
to grow old with "until death do we part."
Please, break down that wall and let me in!

By: Donna Young


Scheme x axaxBxcxxBaccxBxxxxB x
Poetic Form
Metre 111111000111 111101111 01111111 111101111 11111110 111110110 111101111 1011101001 1111011111 110100101111 111110110 11110111111 11011001101 111101111101 1101011111 111110110 11110111111 111101 11111110111 1111011111 111110110 1101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 888
Words 195
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 20, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 226
Words per stanza (avg) 64
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Submitted by DonnaQ1967 on March 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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