Analysis of "Moonbeams"



by Mildred Irene Kellerman

By Mildred Kellerman

I've hiked the creeks and meadows,
mountains and arid plateaus.
In search of beautiful gems and rocks.
a testimony of God's beautiful art!

And just by chance, once or twice,
seen sunbeams, glistening on crystal ice.
A spark, gone instantly, as if never there,
but remembered, as they disappeared.

I've eagerly searched for rainbows,
with sunbeams, instead of pots of gold.
Most of all, on starry nights within a heavy mist,
searched fervently for moonbeams, a lifelong wish.

I've yet to see a moonbeam, floating anywhere.
I wonder if they truly exist, or if they're just thin air.
I'll keep searching high and low, far and near,
maybe, glimpse a moonbeam, before it disappears....

In ah, I've watched as faces of angel's appear,
mystically, in puffy white clouds, so near.
They're probably busy hiding the moonbeams,
keeping them safe for my nightly moon dreams.

I guess I'll always wonder what makes clouds white!


Scheme A A BBXX CCDX BXXX DDEX EEFF X
Poetic Form
Metre 11001100 110100 110101 100101 011100101 0100111001 0111111 111001101 01110011101 10101101 1100111 11011111 1111101010101 1100110111 1111011010 110111001111111 1110101101 1010101101 01111101101 10101111 1100101001 1011111011 1111101111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 951
Words 161
Sentences 14
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Mildred Irene Kellerman

Raised three children, paid off a 30 year mortgage. Served in the Army during WWII as a Medical/Surgical Technician, T/5 grade. Retired after working for The AZ Dept. of Public Safety for 21.5 years. Now Living in Beautiful Precott, AZ on a mountain top. Writing poetry, family history and a book. Enjoying the beauty of all God's creations. more…

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