Analysis of A view from Babylon



Desert sand sips on western blood.
Life dwindled on a dust storm.
 The Mid-East is drunk;
smashed on the substance of juvenile lives.
Baghdad staggers and stomachs churn;
a harsh place with no feeling for western existence.
Solemn voices, from Muslim mosques –
 unintentionally, moan nature’s loss.
Today, youth is sacrifice.

Heroes they called us,
and heroes we are,
but heroes to whom?
Flesh for the worms in our tombs.
Kabul is necessary;
 let freedom hold a persistent sway,
but why must I die in Baghdad this day?

God, let me die a sweet death;
let my thoughts pursue pleasant memories until the end.
Let me go thinking of love, laughter and allies.
Let not Baghdad steal my breath;
in this cruel city, I will not die.


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Poetic Form
Metre 10111101 1101011 01111 1101011001 10100101 0111110110010 10101101 010001101 011110 10111 01011 11011 11010101 101100 110100101 1111101011 1111011 11101101000101 111101110010 1110111 0110101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 707
Words 127
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 7, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 188
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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