Analysis of A wish to Meet him



I dont know what was in his mind when he fashioned this world
crafted these human puppets to dramatize.
He makes them dance and enjoys the drama
I wish he comes here and empathize.

He germinated a heart and embellished it with emotions
imbibed it inside the puppets tactically.
The emotions started guiding the movements
But controls he kept with himself ,knowingly.

I wish i meet him someday and have coffee with him
Let me pay for the coffee and he grants me a wish
I will ask for The reversal of the rule
Let me play his role and he sails my ship.

I know he is cognizant and clever
Let him get the feel of meeting and departing every now and then
And pray to me for the abeyance
i dont give a reply and test his equanimity and patience

I wish he also departs from his mother and travels miles away
Let him find a new world around him and stand in quandary
he searches for a known hand to hold
and finds the facetious expressions and faces in wry.

I wish he also meets a friend and sees his reflection in him
Let him savor the sweetness of being close to his friend
Then i dissociate them one day and encumber him with memories
And let this happen with him whenever he tries to stand.

I wish he dances with all the puppets together, united and happy
let him get bonded with a faction of artists on his stage
Then i make him loose his tenacity and fall
Let other puppets grieve and estrange.

I m sure he will not find it complaisant
He will regret this meeting with me
He will never grant this wish
rather he pays for coffee.


Scheme XAXA XBXB CDXX XXEE XBXX CXXX BXXX XBDB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (38%)
Metre 11111011111011 1011010110 1111001010 11111010 110001001011010 011010101000 00101010010 10111101100 111111011011 1111010011101 11110010101 1111101111 1111100010 111011100010100101 011110010 1110010110100010 11110011110010101 111011011010100 110101111 01001001001001 1111010101101001 11100101101111 110100111001011100 01110110101111 1111011010010010010 111101010110111 111111010001 110101001 11111111010 110111011 1110111 1011110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,495
Words 295
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on August 20, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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