Analysis of An emotional journey (Senryu) 575



Tear drops like rain drops
run down my cheeks from my eyes
this pain I can't hide.

Sunshine warms my heart
cleansing my soul of sorrow
banishing black clouds.

A cool icy breeze
vanquished negativity
erasing my fears.

Bright shimmering lights
streaked through the star speckled sky
igniting my faith.

The silvery moon
cast soft subtle rays of hope
releasing my gloom.

I held out my hands
and embraced the solitude
of this tranquil place.


Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 1111111 11111 1111 1011110 10011 01101 100100 01011 11001 1101101 01011 01001 1110111 01011 11111 001010 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 419
Words 75
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on May 09, 2015

Modified on April 12, 2023

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