Analysis of Ascent



The descent into the darkness has ended
Allowing the sun to finally rise,
A burden taken from my shoulders
So I may ascend to claim my prize.
My chains have now been broken
My spirit is now finally free,
For my ascent is that of my destiny
And the ending I really want to see.
Destiny is but the future unmade
A place in history we will one day touch,
For beauty alone can exist without life
Yet life without beauty not as much.
The far away plains call out my name
A whisper that echoes on the wind,
Something old and something new
But nothing for those who have sinned.
So I raise a glass and drink a toast
For the curse has been taken away,
My rising smile becomes my beacon
The only one true and final way.


Scheme ABCBDEEEFGHGIJKLMNDN
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 00101010110 0100111001 010101110 111011111 1111110 110111001 11011111100 0010110111 1001101001 01010011111 11001101011 110110111 010111111 010110101 1010101 11011111 111010101 101111001 110101110 010110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 691
Words 140
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 561
Words per stanza (avg) 140
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Submitted on July 03, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Marcus DeStorm

Born in Leeds, England, Marcus De Storm is married with two twin daughters. He finds time to write across the board with Story-Shorts, Novels, Poetry and Niches, between running his Family business in Multi-Media and Technology on an International scale.Recently published, Marcus intends to release three further books throughout the Summer, and three more for Christmas 2012. A specially selected "Anthology" of Poetry is scheduled for sometime in 2012, but as yet, there is no fixed date for this project.Living in Walton, Wetherby, Marcus remains to be no stranger to the Internet through his 40 Blogsites that he and his staff manage on a day to day basis.Favourite saying and Motto: Get a life, live it, love it. more…

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