Analysis of Boat on the Water



Looking out over the water, a small dot
appears on the horizon.
Floating, drifting, swaying with the waves,
the wind carries it closer to the shore.
Mesmerized I can only watch, larger and
larger it grows.
Time passes slowly as I sit and wait,
anticipating it's arrival.
Frail, weathered, braving all elements,
the small craft's voyage comes it's end.
Today the small boat journeyed from afar,
over the waters of the reflecting pool.
Safely reaching the other side of the pool,
a man inspects the boat, before
setting it back into the water,
for the return trip.
A toy boat sails for home, to the happy
child with out-stretched hands.
It's captain.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLLDMNOPB
Poetic Form
Metre 10110010011 0110010 101010101 0110110101 1011101100 1011 1101011101 01001010 110101100 01110111 0101110101 10010100101 10100101101 01010101 101101010 10011 0111111010 11111 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 630
Words 112
Sentences 9
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 509
Words per stanza (avg) 112
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 22, 2023

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