Analysis of Daddys Boy



I love your smile, love your laugh, your just a buddle of joy;
I'm so glad that your a daddys boy;
I never thought I could handle a child, my temper was a little more then mild;
I love your eyes, the perfect shade of brown, you make me happy;
To where nothing can bring me down;
You progressed so well, you make me proud, I don't care how dumb I sound;
You only been here eleven months, but I feel like your my bestfriend;
I'll do for you whatever I can;
Nothing beats your hugs, they are so tight, I gotta fight for air, squeezing me like a teddy bear;
Next is your kisses, they are so soft, nothing beats being your parent;
Imma work hard to give you something good to inherent, I dont want you to get the bad, cause you'll get the trouble I had, esp since I didn't have a dad;
I don't want you to get my anger, that's one letter off of danger, then there's my bipolar, having that control you like a game and that's a controller;
I can't wait for your party, watch you open that brand new toy, nothing like knowing your a daddy's boy.


Scheme AABCDEBFGHIJA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111110111 11111011 11011110011101010111 111100111111110 11101111 1011111111111111 1101101011111111 11111011 10111111111011110110101 11110111110110110 1111111011010111111011110101111110101 11111111011101110111010101011101010010 1111110111011111011010101
Characters 1,025
Words 205
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 61
Words per line (avg) 16
Letters per stanza (avg) 788
Words per stanza (avg) 205
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Submitted on October 30, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joey Knepp

I'm 19 years old. I have a son whos name is Liam hes turning one oct. 30. I just now started writing because i feel it gets my feelings out and its better then letting my feelings build and fighting. more…

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