Analysis of Do better than before



DO BETTER THAN BEFORE
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 Relaxing in my temple
 I thought this planet remembered me
 She took me back so tenderly
 Arranging her crimson robe
 Full of fruits and seeds,

I slept as never before
 Like pebbles on the breast of river
 Nothing between me and the running water
 But my thoughts floated like flowers
 To reach the branches of the big tree,

All night I heard the fairy kingdom
 Breathing fragrance around me
 And angels doing their work in darkness
 All night I rose and fall in that paradise
 To affirm myself to do better than before
 With true nature and not just to advise.

~~~~~Jawahar Gupta ~~~~


Scheme A XBBXX ACCXB XBXXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 110101 1 0100110 111100101 11111100 0100101 11101 1111001 110101110 10011001010 11110110 110101011 111101010 1010011 0101011010 1111010110 10111110101 1110011101 110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 617
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 5, 6, 1
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

Modified on April 25, 2023

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