Analysis of Etchings



I must have been
Written in pencil
Somewhere on your surface
The depths of you
Reserved for someone else
I lift, flake
And am gone
With one quick breath
Soft and bruised
I linger
My shell translucent
And you are
For all the world to see
Carved in my bones.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMN
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 10010 11110 0111 01111 111 011 1111 101 110 11010 011 110111 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 243
Words 50
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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